I absolutely love the worlds you create in your stories! Excellent work, just like last time. I really enjoy the order in which you chose to explain how things got to where they were with the man bound to the girl's soul, and how you justified her anger through showing what she had been through with the Duke prior to her death. Between this and your piece in September for the first Writer's Jam, you definitely have proven you can write characters that are different in meaningful ways but are all engaging and interesting to read about. You are absolutely one of the most talented writers I've run into on Newgrounds and I hope to continue seeing your participation in future Writer's Jams and other writing events! Stay tuned for winner announcements within the next week or two!
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Thank you so much for your review, your very kind words, and hosting these jams!
Lovely story, the "curse the wrong person" premise is cool. I think I'd like to see the hunter's own opinion about Duke and the old or new religion, cause he seems too indifferent about killing a person, especially of this rank. More like assassin then a hunter. Anyway, the setting was interesting, and the final part was done really great
Thanks for the review. I've been thinking about expanding the story into a web-novel, which would allow me to delve further into details, thoughts, and backstories.
Sheik13LoZ
Awesome! The curse aspect with the bones works well, and this world is interesting. Nice way of working the Solstice in.